Friday, May 16, 2014

Ascension from the Devil's Garden

Croc stared straight across at the line of jagged green peaks not a mile from him. Strangely, through the low points of the opposing peaks, he could see another row of mountains just beyond like the jagged teeth of a dragon. He even imagined another row beyond that, and another, as the tales of his great ancestors told around the evening fire. Just how many rows of long, deep valleys and razor-like ridges were there, he didn’t know. No one knew. The furthest anyone had journeyed and returned was seven valleys; seven versions of hell just like their own. He found it impossible to even consider seven different microcosms each offering their own dangers, their own nuances for survival. He was just barely able to brave the length of the valley on his own, let alone a place wholly unfamiliar.

Turning his head to the north before rotating it back to the south, he could almost see the entire length of the valley if not for the mist which constantly shrouded the southern end. The south end held the low point of the valley which collected the daily rainfall forming a swamp. In the stories of the ancients, tales of lakes, open bodies of water not shrouded by dense foliage could be found. This was not the case in their valley which struggled to find fresh, non-stagnated pools of water. Therefore, he couldn’t believe these lakes existed because no one in the past hundred years who had left the valley and returned told of one. To Croc, lakes were the closest thing to a myth he could imagine.

Swiveling his head back around, careful to limit his movements, he took pleasure in this privilege. After all, this was the first time he was allowed to journey above the tree line to view the world outside the Devil’s Garden, the name of this thin valley which was his home. Being in the open as he was, however, was not something his clan did. It was dangerous to expose one’s self to the sky where all sorts of deadly creatures roamed. Because of that, he sought out a stand where the rocks were still bigger than himself and offered some protection, some camouflage. Twenty yards further up, the rocks thinned to small boulders then gravel for a few hundred more yards. Above that openness extended a sheer, rough-hewn wall of rock another quarter of a mile up. With a slow turn to the north, he could see where the wall of rock dipped down to just above the tree line, but there was still too much open area to chance an ascent without being viewed. And being seen in the Devil’s Garden almost always meant death.

Looking up to the sky wary of its predators, he saw the oncoming clouds of the night’s rainfall. They were dark puffy entities which rolled over the peaks like a dragon’s claw as the sun cast its last rays of life on the neighboring chasm. Seeing this, Croc knew he had to start his journey down to safely where he could use the common fluorescent moss to light his way to the path. Once found, it was less than a mile to his village, a series of caves near the valley’s floor. No one, however, spent time on the valley’s floor if they wanted to live. That’s because there was no ground, just sludge. This slurry could suck a man under within minutes if what existed in the murk didn’t kill a person first.


No, the Devil’s Garden wasn’t a place for the incautious. It was a place where alertness was mandatory and recklessness killed without mercy. In his youth, Croc had learned that the hard way. It had been his first experience with Geyser, a gray dragon inhabiting the tall peak at the north end of the valley.

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